2. In a previous assignment, you wrote an introduction article in the “F” pattern. Based on what we discussed in class and based on the feedback provided in class, write a new introductory “content” incorporating “plain English writing for the web” in the “F” pattern including visuals. You are to include your “revised version” (if the version you submitted was not in the F-Pattern). Ensure that it addresses the three main

objectives of plain English writing. As a reminder, this is an introductory post for your business. Ensure you list it in your hardcopy. (12 Marks)

Revised Version

Jewelry Made to Wear Everyday! 

At Everlast Jewels, we make jewelry that doesn’t rust, tarnish, or fade after a few wears. Our Jewelry is made for everyone and is affordable, stylish, and trendy on a budget. 

Long Lasting Jewelry Quality

Our jewelry is made to last forever! with the help of our anti-rust, and water proof spray that creates a protective layer keeping your jewelry looking brand new. 

• Helps limit rusting from water exposer 

• Safe for all skin types
• Simple to Use on the Daily

Stylish and Trendy 

We have a large collection of gold plated jewelry from simplistic, bold, and fancy pieces made to bring any look to the next level! Our Jewelry is made to help our customers feel confident and fashionable, bringing out the best version of themselves. 

Jewelry Care and Tips 

Visit our blog page for jewelry care and styling tips to keep your jewelry fresh and looking its absolute best! Our blog offers tips and tricks on 

• Simple jewelry care and protection 
• Styling ideas and looks
• Answers commonly asked questions from customers

At Everlast Jewels, our goal is  to satisfy our customers making sure they feel confident, stylish, and effortlessly beautiful everyday!

Old Version 

Jewelry that Lasts Forever

At Everlast Jewels, we believe that jewelry shouldn’t rust within a week of wearing. Our business is dedicated to changing the jewelry industry, making affordable, long-lasting, trendy, durable gold plated jewelry with our anti-rust and water proof spray that helps prevent tarnishing permanently. 

We are passionate about good quality and affordable jewelry while providing strong customer satisfaction. Our Blog is the place to go when it comes to jewelry inspiration and jewelry care.  We offer a wide range of jewelry, starting from bold, simplistic, and sentimental pieces that will enhance your everyday look. With everlast jewels, our jewelry is made to inspire and build confidence effortlessly.